Diamante Poem

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Diamanté Poem-Crónicas Mías


Adil

Convivial,  Ethereal;

Edifying, Vivifying, Mystifying;

Nurturing  Souls……Murdering  Roles;

Belying,  Defying,  Falsifying;

Malicious, Avaricious;

Despot



(This is a pic from my all time favorite game, Assassin's Creed; this was the best choice which I thought, could perfectly go with this blog) 

[This poem revolves around describing oneself and counter-describing the absolute opposite. The English version of my Arabic-origin name is "just", thus the best antonymous word, according to me, is "tyrant" or "despot". Hoping you all like it!] 

Comments

  1. Malik Zain Ali SajidNovember 14, 2020 at 3:22 AM

    Considerable effort done, really loved it, AMAZING WORK !

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  2. Mustajab AhmedNovember 14, 2020 at 11:15 AM

    Wonderful my friend your poem oozes perfection. Have to read it again.

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  3. Muhammad BilalNovember 15, 2020 at 8:21 AM

    Really wow. No words to say about it, it's so prodigious and stupendous that caused a whopping increment in my vocabulary. This is not merely an ordinary creative writing but also it is a vast assemblage of lexicon of semantics. Stay blessed.
    REGARDS.

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    1. Adil Ali TariqNovember 15, 2020 at 8:38 AM

      The perfect comment really exists 😂 Thanks 😅

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    2. Muhammad BilalNovember 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM

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    3. Muhammad BilalNovember 15, 2020 at 11:23 AM

      I want to make a distinguished comment so that my feedback get wow rxn. But truly speaking; sterling work you did.

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    4. Adil Ali TariqNovember 15, 2020 at 8:06 PM

      Thanks again 😄

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  4. Dayan ShahidNovember 15, 2020 at 11:05 AM

    Nice Vocab. Meaningful Meaning. Rhythm there. All that's needed in a good piece of writing.

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    1. Adil Ali TariqNovember 15, 2020 at 8:07 PM

      Thank you 😄

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    2. Dayan ShahidNovember 16, 2020 at 12:38 PM

      (2/2) And the fourth line really stuck me hard. I liked where it was going. That's an excellent poem.

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  5. BK BailiwicKsNovember 15, 2020 at 8:31 PM

    Sometimes a game becomes a world for you.
    In it ,you can feel yourself,know yourself and you can be anything, anyone u FANCY.
    Describing, Realizing , Judging, of other people is so facile, But "in the game or out of the game, in an imaginary world or in a real word ",knowing ourselves is just a SunRise
    It may have Sunset but for those who are not humble and polite
    But By knowing yourself through this poem , it sounds
    u are an awesome person
    Irie Theme
    Looking forward to your new blogs👌🏻

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    1. Adil Ali TariqNovember 15, 2020 at 8:39 PM

      The appreciation means a lot, thank you bro. 😄 And you are absolutely right about the gaming part, sometimes you can spend hours remaining absorbed in a game you love, thats the beauty of it. ♥️

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  6. Ahmed HusnainNovember 15, 2020 at 9:40 PM

    Wonderful use of vocabulary, bro! Awesome! It deserves appreciation.Well done!!!

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  7. Aaqib KhurshidNovember 17, 2020 at 10:59 AM

    I love the way you used rhythmic words .

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  8. M.A.QureshiNovember 19, 2020 at 10:52 AM

    Nice, gradual shift from one subject to the other. A unique and flamboyant expression of thought by words. An excellent poem all in all.

    P.S. I know that's the inside of the Sphinx (Big-time AC fanboy :)

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    1. Adil Ali TariqNovember 19, 2020 at 6:56 PM

      Thank you for the first part and you are awesome for the second 😂

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  9. MUHAMMAD HUSNAINNovember 19, 2020 at 1:29 PM

    nice one

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  10. Muhammad EhtishamNovember 20, 2020 at 12:04 AM

    I just love how wonderfully you have described yourself in ink!

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  11. Ahmad ButtNovember 20, 2020 at 5:39 AM

    Brilliant work Bro! Your vocabulary and the overall aesthetic of your poem was top notch!

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